(“Why Filipino” from youtube.com)
My advices, plural:
#1, Title
To the title “The Rise Of Rice In Philippine Society,” I would have added this subtitle: “Where Is Science In The Rise & Fall Of Rice & Consumers In Philippine Society?” itself a good book summary.
#2, Chapters
The Introduction itself should have a title, to indicate or imply what the reader can expect to find in the book. To catch the reader’s immediate attention is important.
Chapter 1 – History Of Rice In The Philippines
The chapter can begin anywhere in time, if only to suggest the age-old and can-be-improved method(s) of planting rice in these islands: Luzon, Visayas, and Mindanao.
The chapter should end with the current major problems of the production, consumption and the business of rice. The problems I see, or the areas that need improvement, are:
(1) Yields.
(2) Prices.
(3) Technologies.
(4) Credit.
(5) Economies of Scale.
(6) How Stands PH Farming In Asia?
(7) What To Do Now?
Chapter 2 – Yields
Yields differ in different provinces in the country, even given the same rice variety – what is the basic problem/explanation?
Chapter 3 – Technologies
“Technology” refers to the variety of rice as well as how to plant, grow, harvest and process rice.
Chapter 4 – Credit
The most prevalent form of credit for Filipino farmers is called “Five-Six” where you owe someone five pesos and you give back six pesos within a very short period of time. Banks have yet to attract farmers who may lack much education anyway.
Chapter 5 – Economies Of Scale
Farmers are friendly to each other but do not form informal teams to help each other grow rice more profitably together. (No, I don’t think my alma mater UP Los Baños teaches economies of scale in its essence, only in its definition.)
Chapter 6 – How Stands PH Farming In Asia?
ANN says, the “Philippines Way Behind Other ASEAN Countries in Agri Performance” (Author Not Named, 07 Dec 2018, Agriculture Magazine, agriculture.com.ph):
The Philippines lags behind – in a number of ways – compared to other member countries of ASEAN when it comes to agriculture. The facts and figures that tell us the reason for this were presented by Dr William Dar during a round table discussion on the future of Philippine agriculture…
Chapter 7 – What & How To Do Now?
Your guess is as good as mine!?@517
Chapter 8 – xx
#3, Final Word, xx
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