Looking For An Editor? You Have A Manuscript That Needs Editing. My Advice: “Choose One Who Is Client-Friendly, Digital – And Has Many Years Of Experience!”

What type of manuscript/s do you have that need editing to be good, better, best – book, dissertation, journal-candidate, lecture, manuscript for publication, technical paper, or thesis? As an Editor in Agriculture and related fields, I can help you produce an A-1 manuscript very fast – given my 47 years of experience, and in the last 21 years all-digital. (I can also desktop-publish a whole journal issue, or a whole magazine, or a whole book, for you! I have excellent experiences with those.)

(Image sources: “Freelance Editor” from well-storied, well-storied.com; “Client Friendly” from client-friendly.co, client-friendly.co)

Your Editor must be one who is “client-friendly,” as according to client-friendly.co. Yes, hyphen is necessary; and co, not.com – 2 examples of good proofreading, which calls for wide knowledge of the subject matter, which you should look for in an Editor.

“I AM ADAM" – Here is a complete list of editorial services offered by Frank A Hilario as a one-man band digital wizard. Each ADAM’S service starts with your manuscript and ends with an edited, formatted, layouted (desktop-published) printable version – a full package of digital services from one digital editor whose kind is hard to find.

"I AM ADAM." All-Around Advanced Digital Assistant For Manuscript Management. I’m all personal computer (PC) editorial services, no personal meetings required – no printed manuscripts for me to edit by hand. I’m 10 times faster with the PC, and yes, I’m 100 times more accurate.

I have been an Editor of hundreds of manuscripts in Agriculture and related fields. Consider: 1976-1981, I was Founder & Editor in Chief of the Forest Research Institute (FORI) of its monthly newsletter Canopy, quarterly technical journal Sylvatrop, and quarterly color magazine Habitat. Note: Those were still typewriter & commercial printer years. And FORI became well-known and well-liked at the Los Baños Science Community as well as abroad among universities, where we had publication exchanges. The writing and editing have to be good to be liked.

To be a good editor, I have to know methodically my (American) English, a foreign tongue – and I have to be thorough and patient. Where did I get my patience in reading and re-reading and re-reading a manuscript, no matter how long it is? Innate gift and/or personal wish neither inherited nor imparted – my father Dionisio got only to Grade 3, my mother Sixta Agapitoonly to the Cartilla.

I would like to say now that I use my God-given & personally enhanced talents in writing & editing in science in American English to earn my keep, as well as help spread the good news of agricultural science to my countrymen – not to mention editing foreign students who study at UP Los Baños.

So, if you have problems with your manuscript, I can help you much!

My digital editing rates are? Secret! Email me your digital manuscript first, and then I will tell you how much I charge. No obligations. Facebook me for my email.

A freelance editor who is client-friendly? Yours truly!@517

“Writer’s Champ Vs Writer’s Cramp” – You Are One Of Our Modern Indios Bravos If You Can Start – And Then Finish Writing Your Book!

In these unpredictable times, long after the Spanish conquerors called us Filipinos “Indios,” you have to be an Indian Brave if you want to write your autobiography or memoirs. Actually, your first problem is not these challenging times but the time you spend writing your book! Do you know how to spend it wisely? I doubt it.

This is an author of 20+ books – all of them written in drafts and finalized digitally – thank God, and Steve Jobs & Steve Wozniakfor the personal computer or PC! The image you see above is the cover of my Dec 2005 book titled “indios bravos! Jose Rizal as Messiah of the Redemption.” Singly, I believe Rizal was not after Revolution but after Redemption of the Filipinos from mental slavery.

Today, I am your Redeemer. I will redeem you from your writer’s cramp, your inability to write your book. I am your Writer’s Champ who guarantees you no Writer’s Cramp! What is a Writer-Editor with 50+ years experience and who published his own 20+ books good for? (No, age doesn’t matter! Thank God, I will be 82 in September.)

My very first advice to any author is: Use the PC, preferably a laptop; use Microsoft Windows & Office (MS Word).

To write down your thoughts when memories come anytime, use a cheap spiral notebook.

Remember these 2 things: You are the writer. I am the Editor. You will need an Editor like me if you want to finish your book – and love it yourself!

Remember, according to this Indio Bravo,  “The 3 Rs for Writing Your Book” are:
Recall, Review, Rewrite.

Recall.

Recollect first. Everything you recollect: Type, type, type!

Save each file using the first 5 words you type – you don’t have to think hard for a “nice” filename – you are not after filenames but recording your memories.

Do not add to the file after you have saved it. If you open it again, you will be tempted to revise it – bad for continuing to recall.

Copy all files to a flash drive, for safekeeping.

Review.

When you can hardly recall anything else, it’s time to look at the saved files, one by one, just read – then type out the outline of your book. You will review your saved files and organize/reorganize them according to your outline.

Rewrite.

Then go ahead and rewrite.

As you begin to rewrite – send me the draft!

Never mind the grammatical and factual and sequential errors.

This is where you begin to need editorial guidance. The very first thing I will do is scan your very rough draft to “get the feel” of it all, so that I will know how to advise you to improve it, and where. Unless you are an Undiscovered Exceptional Author, you will need my 50-year old editorial advice before you go on after your recollection.

Meanwhile, finish your Recall. When you are ready for Review, you can then call yourself, “Indio Bravo!”@517

The Dilemma Of My Friend Nestor Maniebo Pestelos, (Not) Coming Out With His Personal-Social Memoirs At 81!

Nestor Maniebo Pestelos from Tiaong, Quezon, married & living in Tagbilaran City, Bohol, is a good friend of mine, mind, dating back 60+ years when we were students at UPCA, now UP Los Baños – we both took the competitive writing exam for the Editor In Chief of the UPCA Student Body Organization’s newspaper called Aggie Green & Gold, and he won. He already had content and style, from voracious reading, including Jean-Paul Sarte – existentialist. Me, never heard of him!

And you know what Nestor Mn Pestelos did as Editor In Chief? He appointed Frank A Hilario, a stranger, full-blooded Ilocano, Tagalog Editor! A historical first. Ah, but in high school, I had been devouring Liwayway and Bulaklak!

The other day or so, I saw Nestor’s Lament on Facebook, this:

Nestor Maniebo Pestelos

NOTES TO MYSELF AT 70 (… First time to be posted)… Surprised I found this in my digital file. This was written 9 years ago, when I reached 70. Must find time to finish it now that I feel my body is approaching its deadline. Morbid but we have to accept our body is not made to last forever. Yes, it has an expiration date.

I don’t think my friend has something he is being careful about, a disease – but I can see he has a dis-ease that has no expiration date – cannot even begin to write his book!

Now you know why I created this new blog of mine – to egg on & help my friend write his book that only he can.

Must go back to that Memoirs project I meant to write upon retirement in 2001 but got involved in many development adventures and misadventures. … The clock is ticking fast. Must find time to reduce my work load and devote priority time to writing this “Final Notes on our Way Out.” (Tentative title).

So it’s not 10 years – it has been 20 years in planning, planning – and planning!

Nestor is a friend of Ed Dela Torre, ex-priest and activist. I know Nestor himself went underground during Ferdinand Edralin Marcos Sr’s Martial Law years, I don’t know exactly when. And do you know who saved Nestor Pestelos from himself?

First Lady Imelda Romualdez Marcos saved Nestor Pestelos from the jaws of death!

Do you see now how eye-popping it would be to read my friend Nestor’s memoirs, a story of his life as his last will and testament?

I wrote this note as a reminder to myself about this project.

And Nestor wrote that note 1 year ago!

Ayn Rand was one of the books Nestor Pestelos loved to read when we were AGG editors and aggie students. (Never heard of Ayn Rand either.) Yes, he was always reading, even while walking!

Question: Why can’t Nestor Maniebo Pestelos write his blockbuster memoirs? Answer: He has too many things in his mind!

And I’m just beginning to give advice to people who can’t write their memoirs because they don’t have a creative way of doing it!@517

Frank A Hilario, Out-Of-Eden ADAM – All-Around Advanced Digital Assistant For Manuscript Management

"I AM ADAM" means "I am an All-Around Advanced Digital Assistant For Modern Manuscript Management” at your service!

My one-man-band work for the issues of 2001-2008 as Editor In Chief of the Philippine Journal of Crop Science (PJCS) published by the Crop Science Society of the Philippines (CSSP) based at UP Los Baños in Laguna, is an excellent example of what I can do for anybody, or any group, with my skills as ADAM – “All-Around Advanced Digital Assistant For Modern Manuscript Management” – that is an original coinage. With the PJCS, I did everything except write the papers published – I did write the editorial, though; and I designed the covers of all the 22 issues of PJCS that I worked on until it became “ISI” – meaning, it was listed in the internationally prestigious list called ISI (now Web of Science).

This is from the 03 June 2013 essay that I uploaded to my blog named after me: Frank A Hilario (frankahilario.blogspot.com), where I said pertinently about the image above:

This is all about the Philippine Journal of Crop Science (PJCS); you're looking at the cover of one of the PJCS issues that I designed (in fact, I designed all the 22 covers while I was Editor in Chief, 2001-2008). On the cover of this one, August 2005 issue, the PC clip art is the illustration of my editorial, "The Challenge Of Creativity In Science & The Quest For Quality."

So, today, I am offering you my digital services; you can choose one or all of the below:

Writer 
Editor 
Desktop publisher
Layout artist
Image manipulator
Formatter of texts
Designer of pages

I am your Editor In Chief when needed, all digital. You can ask the publisher of the Philippine Journal of Crop Science(PJCS), which is the Crop Science Society of the Philippines (CSSP), how I worked on the PJCS so fast and so well – the issues were late in coming by 3 years, meaning 9 issues; I actually worked on the issues from 2003 to 2008 – but I had to begin with the 2001 issue because the journal was late 3 years – and made that journal up-to-date in 3 years, in 2007, meaning I worked double time, all with the PC! And with what quality of editing and desktop publishing? The PJCS was listed in the prestigious ISI (World of Knowledge) already the next year, 2008.

I work 100% on the desktop PC and the desktop printer when necessary.

If you need digital editorial help, send me a Facebook message.

“Democracy & The Proper Role Of Journalism?” “All Media For The Good Of All” – Frank A Hilario

What is the proper role of the “press,” today enlarged as “media,” in a developing country like the Philippines? Inez Ponce De Leon (above) more or less claims in her Inquirercolumn, it is “speaking truth to power” (06 July 2022, “Free Press And True History,” (opinion.inquirer.net).

(“Role Of Media” image from PTV News, ptvnews.ph)

Ms Inez speaks of media’s accepted role. Which is not acceptable to me!

I write based on a self-taught & self-styled journalism born 16 April 1975 starting employment by the Forest Research Institute (FORI), based in the campus of UP Los Baños, where I became the Founder & Editor In Chief of FORI’s monthly newsletter Canopy, quarterly technical journal Sylvatrop, and quarterly color magazine Habitat.

Thinking back with what Ms Inez just said, 47 years ago I was “speaking truth to people withoutpower!” Was my journalism less?

I quote Ms Inez’ first paragraph in full:

Freedom of speech is invoked so carelessly, it has become wrongly equated with speaking without accountability. Of equal concern, given recent events, is press freedom. Press freedom, however, is not simply allowing lies to flourish in the media. True freedom rests on the journalistic responsibilities of adhering to ethical standards, objective collection of data, and speaking truth to power.

Others, media for justice: “We seek to change the media to transform democracy to realize a just society” – Craig Arron & Jessica J Gonzalez, Co-CEO, Free Press (2003? freepress.net).

Me, Media for development: The journalism I have practiced for 47 years is Development Journalism: “Communication for Village Development in the 21st Century (CoViD21).”

If your journalism does not support social development, I will not support it!

Janet Steele, in her bookEncyclopedia of Journalism, explains it (2009, Editor: Christopher H Sterling, academia.edu):

Development journalism is a type of reporting and writing on topics related to the process of economic development. Its supporters define it as independent journalism that highlights news of development projects, provides critical coverage of development planning and programs, and informs readers of how the development process is affecting them.

Thailand’s Prime Minister Prayut Chan-o-cha says, “The press and public must unite… [It is] important for all to proceed with reforms and move the country forward” (30 June 2022, “PM Coy On Political Future, Cultivates Media,” Bangkok Post, bangkokpost.com).

That is so important I want to repeat it boldly:

“It is important for all to proceed with reforms and move the country forward” – Prayut Chan-O-Cha.

The Prime Minister of Thailand understands the proper role of journalism but not the Thai journalists themselves!

In his inaugural speech, among other things President Ferdinand “BBM” Marcos Jr said:

When my call for unity started to resonate with you, it did so because it echoed your yearning, mirrored your sentiments, and expressed your hopes for family, for country and for a better future.

Journalists, take a cue from BBM on what your journalism is best for: “for family, for country and for a better future.”

“All media for the good of all!”@517

BBM Sir, We Also Need To Create A Brave New World For Agri Journalism – We Need A “Baro a Bibliya Basaen Mannalon” (“Baro a BBM”) – “New Broad Bible for Multiculture” (“New BBM”)

Your inaugural address as 17^thPresident of the Philippines at the national museum at noon today, Thursday, 30 June 2022 – as a whole: Beautiful speech! Noted: You make it a point that to move the country forward, depends on you and us.

BBM Sir, you said:

I am here to tell you about our future. A future of sufficiency, even plenty of readily available ways and means to get done what needs doing – by you, by me. We do not look back, but ahead. Up the road that we must take to a place better than the one we lost in the pandemic.

“A future of sufficiency” – among others, we will need all the intelligent efforts of our farmers. PH Agriculture is not producing enough food because:

To achieve food sufficiency, we must get our farmers to apply enough of the Arts and Sciences of Agriculture. That basically calls for a dynamic Agri Journalism, backed by a Digital Library of Agriculture. Today, we lack both!

I’m thinking of that digital library in 2 languages. In Ilocano, it’s “Baro a Bibliya Basaen Mannalon” (“Baro a BBM”); in English, it’s “New Broad Bible for Multiculture” (“New BBM”) – “Multiculture” insinuating crops & livestock mixes, excellent for agriculture and the environment, especially contra climate change.

I have to introduce myself. I am Frank A Hilario, the “Father of Agri Journalism,” as UP Los Baños alumnus Reynaldo Mendoza points out on Facebook. I did not realize that until today; yes, I am the “Father of the Binhi Awards” [check out my essay, “Journalists, Wake Up! Philippine Agricultural Journalists (PAJ), You Have Been Slipping On The Job. Frank A Hilario, Father Of “Binhi Awards” Proposes New “Ani Awards” For You To Further Serve Science To Serve Farm Families To Bring Themselves To Prosperity!” (29 June 2022, Towards A New Eden, towardsaneweden.blogspot.com]. I fathered the “Binhi Awards” in 1976, and “Ka Doroy” Valencia God-fathered it.

BBM Sir, particularly, you said in your speech:

Yet there is more out there. Like going forward by new ways of doing, that the pandemic forces [us] to adopt, a stronger resilience, quicker adaptability.

In your hope of making our country successful, your hope is my hope. And in our hope for our brighter future and the futures of our children, your hope is my hope.

Sir, the digital library I am proposing is for the brighter future of Agriculture – through intellectual efforts of government-financed state universities & colleges, led by UP Los Baños, translating technical language into high schooler-understandable language; the highschoolers will then inform their fathers.
(“Women in food” image from IFAJ, linkedin.com)

I propose to be the brains behind Baro a BBM/New BBM, being the son of a farmer in Asingan, Pangasinan, and an alumnus of UP Los Baños.

With a digital library for agriculture, agri journalists will help our farmers win the war for prosperity. (A woman could start the ball rolling, yes!)@517

BBM Sir, About The Negative Media, If You Want It Done Right, You Have To Do It Yourself! This Ilocano Recommends Setting Up A Media Group Called “Bloggers for Building Minds Media (BBM Media) – THiNK! Journalism For National Development

All over Facebook, the #1 website of Filipinos, media posts from the North (Ilocano) to lower Luzon (Bicolano) to the Visayas (Bisaya) to the South (Muslim), the news and views are mostly negative. I call it “Stink Journalism.” Mine is “THiNK! Journalism” – and here I volunteer from Asingan, Pangasinan, to help you, Sir Ferdinand “BBM” Marcos Jr, to think development & act positively!

(Image sources: “CNN Live,” Yahoo!News, ph.news.yahoo.com); “Positive News,” Favpng, favpng.com)

My advice is to fund a new media group whose outputs will soar above Stink Journalism – I call it “THiNK! Journalism,” the concept & term which I invented myself blogging about it almost 5 years ago, on 24 Oct 2017 (“THiNK! Journalism: Calling For Nobler Kinds Of People In Media,” Creative Thinkering, creativethinkering.blogspot.com).

Now then, BBM Sir, I urge you not simply to call for nobler kinds of people in media but to form a media group yourself, bloggers et al, with strict instructions to be always creative and to always practice THiNK! Journalism. Which works like this:

True is it? If True,
Helpful is it? If Helpful,
Inspiring is it? If Inspiring,
Necessary is it? If Necessary,
Kind is it?
THiNK! Then go ahead with Your Journalism. expressing Your Patriotism.

I am calling your to-be-set-up group
“Bloggers for Building Minds” Media (BBM Media).

I am ready, willing and able to extend my skills in creative writing, editing, layouting, desktop publishing, up to the creation of the portable-document-format (pdf) pages – all digital. After me, you are ready to:

1.     Upload your text + visual output to the website, say, bbmmedia.com.

2.     Print commercial copies. All you need is a commercial printer, and BBM Media will purchase a print-on-demand printer, for instant hard copies in 5 minutes or so!

For BBM Media:
“The sky’s the limit – and your imagination is the sky!”
That quote is my original, 13 years old (see 07 April 2009, “BrainShopping. Now, You Can Forget About BrainStorming!” Frank A Hilario, frankahilario.blogspot.com).

With me as all-digital Editor In Chief for BBM Media, nobody will run out of new ideas; new stories! Unparalleled Creativity – How else could I, writer from home (WFH) have bloggedeveryday in the last 3 years, am now 81+?!

Special note: Frank A Hilario has a BS Agriculture degree from UP Los Baños, 1965. I have the sole distinction of being honored as “Outstanding Alumnus for Creative Writing” (2011), the first and the only one so far in the 100-year-plus history of UPLB.

BBM Media – Personally, you could initially fund it with P5 million: Central office, people, print-on-demand printer; journalists in digital offices (mostly WFH) – with personal computers, extension monitors, printers, supplies of ink and paper – including Internet setups.

BBM Media will come up with Positive News; it will “Change the news for good.” THiNK! Journalism will go for development of the islands from North to South. Let’s begin today!@517